To my FIRST Child

[que90nek]

to my daughter,

understand that
i don't fault-her
for keepin us apart
for tearin at my heart

at times i feel like i fail
down in my duties to u
but i love u boo

i'll try harder
to keep in contact with u
u r in my heart-dare
i say that i feel blue

i can't be sorry for me
that i can't see thee
your fatherly influence
is east coast and of no consequence

a tear i shed for my stupidity
a tear in my heart begat thee
no matter what
i love u
and will prove it again and again

[Bedroomeyes]

That was beautiful!!! Good job Que!! :hearts:


*wiping my tears and blowing my nose*

[OhSoPrecious]

Have you sent it to your daughter~?? ;)

[seductive_tee]

u should really send this to her...federal express it

It's nice....

[que90nek]

i think that this poetry may be counterproductive....

i gotta figure out where mom's is coming from....to send this is a definite slap in moms face.....

[ThickBodyHottie]

que, why are you playing little childish games, like trying to see where "moms" is coming from and considering sending the child poems and shit like that?

talk is extremely cheap...even free...get your ass in court or shut the hell up!

[que90nek]

i never considered sending this poem.
i am curious what her problem could be....that is just my nature.

i prefer not to get court ordered anything....so far i have gotten whatever i have made the effort to get with regard to my daughter....any slippin is entirely my fault.

[OhSoPrecious]

Originally posted by que90nek+
i never considered sending this poem.


Ok, that's cool and all. . . but, it's such a beautiful poem. . . you should send it to her. . . maybe not right now. . just save it for her. . send it in a couple of years or so~!!! :)

[Juicey1]

Maybe you could have it printed, framed and present it to her on her 16th or 20th birthday. Hopefully by then, you two will have a wonderful relationship. Right now I think she is a little too young to understand it.

[HulaSista]

that was beautiful.......