Snicker Bar

[que90nek]

snicker bar
snicker bar
you've gone too far
snicker bar
snicker bar
u've created a star

a chocolate morsel
a candy dip
it was the nuts
that sent u on a trip
oozing off your chin
the nuts sat
milkshake newget
made u spat
gurgle or rinse
you begged for more
now does all that make any sense
there's more newget
more for u to get
as u swallow a little more
those nuts on your nose now
a flick of your tongue or
is that an upside down frown

snicker bar
snicker bar
you've gone too far
snicker bar
snicker bar
u've created a star

now it melts but hardens
entering into
your secret gardens
you strip the chocolate off
as it becomes a little soft
your lips caress and pull
milky way milking way way
too much
too much....milk shake again
if u arent careful my friend
soupy and mushy
yet warm and gushy
snicker bar hard again
in out in out
let snicker bar in
in to stay
still
quiet
quiet...
what? u wanna...wanna rideit?




to be continued...

[HulaSista]

you need to hurry your ass up and publish this stuff... truly

[HulaSista]

first book should be:

que - the collections

second book should be:

que and friends (for all your collaborations)

third book should be:

que - continue to walk with me (for all the poems that have seperate continuations to them)

[que90nek]

whats funny is i went to a valentine dinner/dance...sponsored by the bruhs...

a bruh got up...sayin that he had a book of poetry coming out....and that he was going to read a few poems....

uh.....THEY SUCKED.


THEY TRULY DID. Not because none of them rhymed.....just none of them said ANYTHING until the last verse....the very last verse...

[HulaSista]

seeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee - folks ain't being honest with him. now he got the nerves to publish poems that suck til the last verse?

:idea now THERES a poem for YOU to write - :idea

Sucks til the last verse

:D

[que90nek]

lol...

hmmm

sucks till the last verse
as the crowd disperse
i hear no rhymes
i have no times
division was his words
subraction had me skurred
sucks till the last verse
and so i rehearse
for my moment
in the sun
for my moment
for THAT fun

[HulaSista]

lol

:beer

ok ok ok

do i feel a game coming on?

do this one

"The duck fly at midnight"

noooooooooo, no no no no

ummmm

"Fly by night"

:D.... yeah yeah yeah... do that one

"fly by night"

[que90nek]

fly by night?
fly by night...
hmmm sounds a little white
or clear
like that thing u fear
purity in thought
and deed
purity is white
and so i need
a flight....by nite
still don't sound right

[dejavu]

Boy......its time for you to get PAID. You better go boy.

[HulaSista]

i'll be sponsoring the san francisco/oakland leg of his book tour lol

fly by night wasn't right?

or... was it tooooooooooo easy?

me thinks the latter... lol

how about a conceptual prose regarding the following:

"To Be"

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i'll understand if you want to stop here. I know you don't work for (circus) peanuts ;)

[que90nek]

lol

touche!

to be
to be
i be
i be
i be writing verse
and rhyme
i be sippin on
life and time
doesnt sit still
sip
this cup
is almost empty
sip
this love
is good and free
sip
sip
i'm drinkin it all now
sip
i should put this down
but life can't be put down
to be
to be
to be empty
is to be me

[HulaSista]

ok ok ok ok ok

i'm go lee you alone... i'll wait until you have another spontaneous combustion of inspiration...

you been done passed by a fire hydrant and get inspired to writin' 'bout 'the powers of release nozzles in the hazy hot days of summer while standing on the shores of cuba with a smile on your face and the moon at ya back'

:upto: hint! hint!

:D