Ladies Man?

[que90nek]

She called me....

a ladies man

a man of the ladies

sounds a little shady

like slim

cigarettes...but they cause cancer.

i wasnt tryin to romance-her

i can only be me

see

yeah that's what i say

who am i?

insignificant....like a fly

fly away

i will come back to write the rest of this

another

day.

[que90nek]

another day is here
time to put this in gear
these rhymes are trivial
pursuit of happiness subliminal
starting within
that's the spin
sublime messages
written to just
me
i inspect
correct
protect
me

shouldnt u do the same
shame shame
if u r not
just don't get caught
up in this
such a risk
only your heart at the stake
like on the grill
well done some say
well done is fun
legs a quivering
u look like u shivering
u got the shakes
damn, like an earth
hater
u become
after all is said
and
won
yes, won.
winner.

[HulaSista]

Originally posted by que90nek+
only your heart at the stake
like on the grill

again i ask.... why is it the other's person's heart who is ONLY at stake here?

what about the writers' heart?

very danger danger-ish...

[que90nek]

i inspect correct protect ME

i would hope that the reader would do the same.

perhaps u would like to go back and forth, ms hula......

[HulaSista]

if I could. I would.
how should I try?

I am not the one who needs the warning signs.
you close the blinds.

turn on the light, set the vcr
I really want to know how this is dangerous, star

I am still confused. after almost a year
what exactly, should one fear.

I got my eyes wide shut. wrapped warmly and tucked
in my bed but I can't sleep cause you keep me

wondering
why
must
I
fear
your
warnings
of
tears

[HulaSista]

never did get that back and forth :upto: