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que90nek
03-15-2002, 11:49 AM
look deep in my eyes
deeper past these thighs
deeper than the last lies
that i never told u
but that u believed
or perceived to come from me
i told you about me
i told u to flee
see
it was different for u
u could handle what u could not
u could not
and thats sayin a lot
cuz you had a plan
u had another man
but even that didnt protect
made u sorta forget
the warning
the danger
the warning
the danger
danger that poem i wrote
danger danger don't get on the boat
ok...i am done for now
but let me be clear
it is for u...i fear.
OhSoPrecious
03-15-2002, 08:31 PM
But, it seems like you're bringing back some memories with that one~!! :rolleyes:
HulaSista
03-15-2002, 10:03 PM
interesting...
que90nek
03-16-2002, 03:04 AM
Originally posted by OhSoPrecious+
But, it seems like you're bringing back some memories with that one~!! :rolleyes:

uh....yes, you will find similiar topics on old hush...

Danger Danger.
HulaSista
03-18-2002, 06:00 AM
Originally posted by que90nek+
but let me be clear
it is for u...i fear.

why does the fear always fall on the other person? when do we ever fear for ourselves....

i'm going to read your old danger danger poem.
knowledge7
03-18-2002, 09:36 AM
Originally posted by HulaSista+


why does the fear always fall on the other person? when do we ever fear for ourselves....

i'm going to read your old danger danger poem.

I feel what you saying.. but then again.. this came from him
que90nek
03-18-2002, 08:09 PM
the fear is for the other person because the first person knows full well what to expect...so ...a warning is issued....the person is not expected to heed the warning because they have a plan....etc etc.....
HulaSista
03-18-2002, 11:01 PM
mmmmmkay.

do they really have a plan? or is it fear blind folding them from the danger, danger.

i just re-read the danger danger poem on old hush: that was a more progressive warning... like..."the run away train" warning.... this one is a "come walk with me down by the river and let's talk" warning

more gentle and caring here... like the writer 'cares' now, perhaps? the other one was as if the writer 'refuse to take responsiblity' for the fate of the warned.
que90nek
03-19-2002, 05:31 AM
very good, hula....very good...

perhaps the first one was written for more than one.....

one too late....one on the verge.
HulaSista
03-19-2002, 08:25 AM
and if someone know of the dangers

and learn from anothers smoke signals

why would they choose to become ... a target?

I guess those designer blind folds plays a part in it all, huh?
OhSoPrecious
03-19-2002, 09:55 AM
Very interesting. . .
que90nek
03-19-2002, 10:20 AM
...interesting ...that its interesting....

lol

what does interesting mean ....

i've seen it so many times...somebody please tell me!
HulaSista
03-19-2002, 12:41 PM
becoming interested in what has been said already....

or the poem itself......

definition: exciting curiosity or attention; of interest

also..... its original word: interest, also mean: a right or claim to something...

in which, in regards to this poem..... may show that those who have read or posted to this thread (:rolleyes: ) shows a claim to its meaning.....and how it applies to them?

this word is also synonymous with:
attractive
motivating
appealing
exciting
fascinating
attention-grabbin
out of the ordinary
remarkable

and worthy of note......... which is why i post.......

better than it's antonym.... boring. :D
que90nek
03-19-2002, 02:45 PM
thanks hula
knowledge7
03-20-2002, 09:02 AM
Hold up.. I got to read that again
Tastey
03-20-2002, 10:05 AM
Hey Knowledge,

While you at it, the poetry section of the old Hush reads like a Terry McMillan novel...lol :p Check it ALL out. lol :p