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ice-c
11-12-2004, 07:13 PM
u r empty and bitter
just a part of my shitter
flushed not once but twice
go into the sewer with the mice
and rats and roaches and other clean things
compared to you
lonely and not lonely
you craze and amaze yourself
with schizo its so
sad
to see.
flush
the sound of i don't really give a fuck
watch the water go round and round
to cleanse the bowl with that good sound
chug a lug
the water is gone and filling back up again
ka plop ka plunk into the sewer
the end

HulaSista
11-14-2004, 08:19 PM
you should really consider a career in writing greeting cards...
















:D













lol












sorry ... i couldn't resist :wolf

ice-c
11-14-2004, 08:45 PM
damn..i had forgotten i wrote that.......

i must have been ...in a mood.

HulaSista
11-14-2004, 08:46 PM
lol

how you forget in 2 days?

were you in a trancehttp://www.wackyb.co.nz/yh/yb643.gif ????????

j/k man

ice-c
11-14-2004, 08:49 PM
all the poetry i do...
i do on the spur of the moment...
in fact...this is the only copy that exists....


i look at it now...and want to change the ending.......cuz the flow isnt what i want....but.....the poem ...the pureness of it...would change if i did that.

HulaSista
11-14-2004, 08:53 PM
oooooooooooooooooooooooh... ok... you no want to put a "ice ice baby productions (r) (c) " behind it?

ice-c
11-14-2004, 08:55 PM
lol....

poetry is so ...therapeutic......