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TheProphet69
10-20-2003, 05:43 PM
Lemme know what u think. . . .it is copywritten, so dont steal my shit. . .lol. . .i hope u like it. . .

Blaze
The fire,
Beautiful flame,
Flickering,
Necessary for survival,
Brightens the path for lost and forgotten souls,
Warms the coldest winter,
Softens the hardest of hearts,
Dancing back and forth,
Singing the sweet song of love,
It rejoices,
In Awe,
At such a beautiful being,
Wanting all of her,
But Reserving it's inner thoughts for fear of being blown out,
The Fire,
Beautiful flame,
Flickering,
Touch it and be singed,
But a lesson learned there in. . .

Copyright ©2003 Rafael Guzman Jr.

P.S. This is a poem. . .my lyrics are raw tho. . .lol

dulce
10-20-2003, 05:49 PM
see, now <i>this</i> has power! Would like to see ya lyrics...

TheProphet69
10-20-2003, 05:56 PM
Thanks Alot. . .i just finished replying to ya post about that Cam'Ron joint. . .Im goin to try ro post a few verses in here. . .Admin, would that be a problem???

TheProphet69
10-25-2003, 01:03 PM
i need to know what ya'll think. . .